Oct 23, 2008

Adcopy Case Study

Case Study: Ad Writing Techniques

Length of Case Study: 14 Days

The purpose of this case study was to determine how different ad writing techniques can affect an ad group’s CTR, Quality Score, ad positioning, and the overall CPC. You will find the results very revealing and they should answer a lot of your questions regarding ad copy and the benefits of writing good ads. At WealthyAffiliate.com we emphasize that writing relevant ads is very important. The data from this case study further validates these ad writing techniques.

The data for this case study was collected over a 14 day period for two different "Test" campaigns. The campaigns were created for the sole purpose of collecting data and were NOT fully optimized to make sales. The two campaigns focused on promoting Music Download sites, and Data Entry products

Campaign #1

Music Download Industry.
Adgroup: Download Games

Keywords:

download game
download games
download games online
game download
game downloads
"download game"
"download games"
"download games online"
"game download"
"game downloads"
[download game]
[download games]
[download games online]
[game download]
[game downloads]
-free

Ad 1:

Unlimited Games - $39.95
Get All the Hottest New Games
For Low One-time Price.

Ad Technique: Removing Non-Buyers with Price
Average Position (adgroup): 4.9
CPC: $0.18
Number of Clicks: 26
CTR: 0.1%

Ad 2:

Are You Addicted to Games
So Are We. Learn How to Get
Unlimited Game Downloads Here.

Ad Technique: Question
Average Position (adgroup): 4.9
CPC: $0.18
Number of Clicks: 65
CTR: 0.3%

Ad 3:

Download Games Online
Unlimited Downloads. Join &
Download Games Today.

Ad Technique: High Relevancy
Average Position (adgroup): 4.9
CPC: $0.17
Number of Clicks: 246
CTR: 1.0%



Adgroup: PSP Downloads

Keywords:

download psp
download psp game
download psp games
psp download
psp downloads
unlimited psp
unlimited psp download
unlimited psp downloads
"download psp"
"download psp game"
"download psp games"
"psp download"
"psp downloads"
"unlimited psp"
"unlimited psp download"
"unlimited psp downloads"
[download psp]
[download psp game]
[download psp games]
[psp download]
[psp downloads]
[unlimited psp]
[unlimited psp download]
[unlimited psp downloads]
-free

Ad 1:

Unlimited PSP Downloads
Get complete access to 1000+ PSP
Downloads. Only $34.95.

Ad Technique: Remove Non-Buyers by including price
Average Position (adgroup): 13.9
CPC: $0.10
Number of Clicks: 30
CTR: 0.4%

Ad 2:

PSP Downloads Scam
Don't Get Ripped off Online.
Safely Download PSP Games.

Ad Technique: The use of “scam”
Average Position (adgroup): 13.9
CPC: $0.13
Number of Clicks: 50
CTR: 0.9%

Ad 3:

PSP Games Unleashed
Get 1000's of Your Favorite PSP
Game Downloads Here.

Ad Technique: The use of a “power” word (unleashed)
Average Position (adgroup): 13.9
CPC: $0.12
Number of Clicks: 46
CTR: 0.8%

Summarization of Results for Campaign 1

I bet you are saying right now, “Why can’t Kyle and Carson achieve a better CTR than 1.0% for these adgroups?” The fact of the matter is that many of these keywords are very broad and untargeted.

For example, the broad match keywords “PSP download” and “download games” received the highest traffic and had the lowest CTR. Why is this? First of all, "PSP download" is pretty ambiguous and a broad match search term like this will get picked up when some types in “racing game psp download” and “psp download video files”. The ads in the PSP ad group are not highly targeted to such keywords which is why CTR will is low.

Now let’s take a look at adcopy performance for both groups.

In the Download Games adgroup there are 3 different styles of ads. The best CTR was obtained by the ad that is the most relevant to the keywords. It is also worth noting that, the ad put in place to remove the non-buyers definitely did a good job, attracting the lowest number of visitors.

The ads which were highly relevant (common keywords within the adcopy) had a lower CPC overall. Google looks at your ads, and if the keywords within your ad group are contained in your adcopy, they will give you a higher quality score. The higher your Quality Score, the lower you will pay per click. It's Google's way of rewarding advertisers with highly relevant ads.

The ad that used the question technique did not work out too well either, only achieving a CTR of 0.3%. It was clear that this ad did not appeal to the audience looking for games. The question technique can be very useful, but only if you capture the persons interested. A better question would have been “Want Unlimited Game Downloads?”

In the PSP Downloads adgroup, the results were a little better, although they still produced a fairly low CTR. Again, putting the price in the ad negatively affected the CTR by removing non-buyers and potentially some buyers. This technique is not always the best approach because you could be losing customers if you have a good landing page with good sales copy. In the case of these keywords, having a price in the ad is definitely a good idea. Some of these keywords could receive hundreds of clicks a day because they are not targeted enough.

With an adgroup with keywords that are more relevant, for instance.

Download racing psp game
Download tennis game for psp
Download new psp game

You do not want to use a price in the ad for such targeted keywords because it could scare a low number of visitors away before even getting to your webpage. When deciding whether or not to have the price in the ad, you should determine if the keywords are going to get a lot of traffic or not. If the term is broad, have the price in the ad, otherwise don't use it as it will lower your CTR and could stop qualified traffic from reaching your page. It's always better to select keyword that are highly relevant to your webpage so that you do not have to "eliminate" non buyers using this technique.

The Scam and action Phrase technique topped the CTR department for these two ad groups. This is because they compelled the user to click the ad. The word “scam” has been proven to be effective over and over again because people are always looking to avoid getting “scammed”. You can add these keywords to any ad title and it will most likely improve your adgroup CTR.

Important Note:

The more relevant the ad is to the adgroup keywords, the lower overall CPC will be.

From the two ad groups in this campaign, we tested multiple styles of adcopy. Posing a question, removing non buyers, using the word "Scam", using a "Power" word, and writing a highly relevant ad. In ad group 1, the highly relevant ad achieved the highest CTR and lowest CPC, while in ad group 2 the using the word "SCAM" achieved the higher CTR, but didn't cost the least because there were more relevant keywords within the first ad. This solidifies what we teach here at WA. Regardless of the CTR that your adcopy can achieve, RELEVANCE is what makes good adcopy. If you use our common keyword technique for grouping your keywords, then use the common keyword within your adcopy you will achieve both High CTR and lower CPC


Campaign #2

Data Entry Products
Adgroup: Data Entry

Keywords:

data entry
data entry program
data entry programs
data entry review
"data entry"
"data entry program"
"data entry programs"
"data entry review"
[data entry]
[data entry program]
[data entry programs]
[data entry review]

Ad 1:

Data Entry Scams
Do Data Entry Programs Really Work?
Find Out With Data Entry Reviews.

Ad Technique: The use of “scam”
Average Position (adgroup): 14.8
CPC:
$0.23
Number of Clicks: 178
CTR:
2.4%

Ad 2:

Data Entry Rip-Off Alert
Do Not Get Ripped-Off with Data
Entry Products. Learn more here.

Ad Technique: The use of rip-off
Average Position (adgroup): 14.8
CPC: $0.26
Number of Clicks: 150
CTR: 2.3%

Ad 3:

Data Entry Sucks
And You Know it Does. You can
Make Huge Money Doing it.

Ad Technique: In your face
Average Position (adgroup): 14.8
CPC: $0.24
Number of Clicks:
160
CTR: 2.0%



Adgroup: Data Entry Pro

Keywords:

compare data entry pro
data entry pro
data entry pro review
dataentrypro
dataentrypro com
"compare data entry pro"
"data entry pro"
"data entry pro review"
"dataentrypro"
"dataentrypro com"
[compare data entry pro]
[data entry pro]
[data entry pro review]
[dataentrypro]
[dataentrypro com]

Ad 1:

Data Entry Pro Review
Does Data Entry Pro Work?
Find Out With Data Entry Reviews.

Ad Technique: Highly Relevance
Average Position (adgroup): 4.5
CPC: $0.31
Number of Clicks: 126
CTR: 6.6%

Ad 2:

Hate Your Stupid Job
So Did We. Now we are Making
$100's/day Enter Data.

Ad Technique: Shocking
Average Position (adgroup): 4.5
CPC: $0.36
Number of Clicks: 74
CTR: 4.1%

Ad 3:

Data Entry Pro Scam
Is Data Entry Pro a Big Scam?
Data Entry Pro Review Here.

Ad Technique: The use of “scam”
Average Position (adgroup): 4.5
CPC: $0.33
Number of Clicks: 134
CTR: 7.7%

Summarization of Results for Campaign 2

The ad groups within this campaign had slightly different results, and provide more data on the difference between generic keywords and keywords that are highly specific to a specific component of an industry (in this case a product).

The first ad group (Data Entry) was geared towards obtaining bulk data entry traffic, whereas the second ad group (Data Entry Pro) was built to attract visitors for a more targeted product, in this case, Data Entry Pro.

Again, the ad with “scam” in the title was the all-round top performer. This technique proves to be successful, but results will vary based on the products/industry you are promoting. You DO NOT want to use the word SCAM in every ad that you write, but if you have this technique in your back pocket you can use it at the right time, for the right product and you can make a lot of sales from these ads.

Product-type keywords are proven to convert the highest not only in terms of CTR, but actual sales. The reason for this is that people are looking for something very specific when they search product keyword and usually have done some prior research before coming to your site. Again, with the ad1, we see that the CPC was lower than the other ads due to the fact that the keywords from the ad group were used in the adcopy of this ad. Although this ad group did not receive the highest CTR, it did cost less.


Campaign #2

Data Entry Products
Adgroup: Data Entry

Keywords:

data entry
data entry program
data entry programs
data entry review
"data entry"
"data entry program"
"data entry programs"
"data entry review"
[data entry]
[data entry program]
[data entry programs]
[data entry review]

Ad 1:

Data Entry Scams
Do Data Entry Programs Really Work?
Find Out With Data Entry Reviews.

Ad Technique: The use of “scam”
Average Position (adgroup): 14.8
CPC:
$0.23
Number of Clicks: 178
CTR:
2.4%

Ad 2:

Data Entry Rip-Off Alert
Do Not Get Ripped-Off with Data
Entry Products. Learn more here.

Ad Technique: The use of rip-off
Average Position (adgroup): 14.8
CPC: $0.26
Number of Clicks: 150
CTR: 2.3%

Ad 3:

Data Entry Sucks
And You Know it Does. You can
Make Huge Money Doing it.

Ad Technique: In your face
Average Position (adgroup): 14.8
CPC: $0.24
Number of Clicks:
160
CTR: 2.0%



Adgroup: Data Entry Pro

Keywords:

compare data entry pro
data entry pro
data entry pro review
dataentrypro
dataentrypro com
"compare data entry pro"
"data entry pro"
"data entry pro review"
"dataentrypro"
"dataentrypro com"
[compare data entry pro]
[data entry pro]
[data entry pro review]
[dataentrypro]
[dataentrypro com]

Ad 1:

Data Entry Pro Review
Does Data Entry Pro Work?
Find Out With Data Entry Reviews.

Ad Technique: Highly Relevance
Average Position (adgroup): 4.5
CPC: $0.31
Number of Clicks: 126
CTR: 6.6%

Ad 2:

Hate Your Stupid Job
So Did We. Now we are Making
$100's/day Enter Data.

Ad Technique: Shocking
Average Position (adgroup): 4.5
CPC: $0.36
Number of Clicks: 74
CTR: 4.1%

Ad 3:

Data Entry Pro Scam
Is Data Entry Pro a Big Scam?
Data Entry Pro Review Here.

Ad Technique: The use of “scam”
Average Position (adgroup): 4.5
CPC: $0.33
Number of Clicks: 134
CTR: 7.7%

Summarization of Results for Campaign 2

The ad groups within this campaign had slightly different results, and provide more data on the difference between generic keywords and keywords that are highly specific to a specific component of an industry (in this case a product).

The first ad group (Data Entry) was geared towards obtaining bulk data entry traffic, whereas the second ad group (Data Entry Pro) was built to attract visitors for a more targeted product, in this case, Data Entry Pro.

Again, the ad with “scam” in the title was the all-round top performer. This technique proves to be successful, but results will vary based on the products/industry you are promoting. You DO NOT want to use the word SCAM in every ad that you write, but if you have this technique in your back pocket you can use it at the right time, for the right product and you can make a lot of sales from these ads.

Product-type keywords are proven to convert the highest not only in terms of CTR, but actual sales. The reason for this is that people are looking for something very specific when they search product keyword and usually have done some prior research before coming to your site. Again, with the ad1, we see that the CPC was lower than the other ads due to the fact that the keywords from the ad group were used in the adcopy of this ad. Although this ad group did not receive the highest CTR, it did cost less

Conclusion


This case study shows that your Quality Score is based not only on CTR, but on Ad relevance. If your ad has the keywords from the ad group in the adcopy, you are awarded Quality Score points, and your CPC goes down.

Main Points to take away from this Case Study:

  • Using keywords that are not highly targeted to your adcopy, or are too broad in nature will not perform for you. Advertising a keyword like: "Top Adwords Guide" is much better than advertising a keyword like: "Adwords".

  • Having the keywords from your adgroup within your adcopy will give you quality score points. This will lower your CPC and positioning over time.

  • Using the "Common Keyword" technique as taught here at WealthyAffiliate.com will help you group your keywords so you can achieve the best quality score possible.

  • Use of the word "Scam" in your adcopy has been statistically proven to increase your CTR - however, do not use it in every ad.

    Using the word "Review" in your adcopy can help increase CTR.

  • Adding the price to your adcopy and more specifically in your title, can help filter out unwanted traffic on keywords that are broad in nature.

  • Posing a Question or using a Call to action phrase is a great technique of attracting visitors to your site. Google highly recommends using "Call to action" phrases.

Side Note: Although this campaign was intended for testing purposes only, it was profitable. Overall profit for this campaign was $152.57 over 14 days. To test these techniques, we needed to choose high traffic keywords such as “Game Downloads”, keywords that we would not normally use in a highly targeted campaign. Also, over the test period, it was apparent that some keywords were not performing well for us – meaning they were wasting our money. In a “Real World” scenario we would have dropped these keywords very quickly. If the purpose of this campaign was to make money we could have easily profited more from it by cutting advertising costs on such keywords. The majority of sales came from the Data Entry Campaign as many of the Game Download keywords were not relevant enough

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